Clutching pity like a prize to her side.
[[I loved this line. How true it stands!]]
Your writing baffles me. I'm usually very strict and critizing, but I find nothing to improve; just keep writing. You're words are amazing.
I would be interested to see you write in a structed form [though most rhyme].. So, if you attempt one, find me, I'd love to see what you can come up with.
Your pieces are brilliant and well thought out; you have the mind of a god for poetry.
Keep it up; I'll certainly be checking up on you. Keep me interested, and thank you for sharing.
I really like this poem. i expecially how you like played it out. how you took something so real and made it understandable and made more understandable. if you know why im trying to say.. anywhoo great job. and in my poem how i put the "&&" in it. i just did that because i like the way it looks. your not literally supposed to say and and. your supposed to just say it once. lol thanks for the CC :D