Fallen Angel Part II

by debbylyn   Mar 1, 2007


Blackened sun in empty night
Cast prism moons through broken eyes
Tears that well but never fall
Keep weeping wishes close to call

On bated breath a vision speaks
The Mystic's light his Angel keeps
A cruel caress of anguished cries
For in her soul the Mystic lies

On dismal lake no ripples break
The Mystic prays his soul to take
Abysmal loss his quest does burn
The Angel speaks at every turn:

"Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts
Quench my desire, no count the cost
One beat alone, a dream of two
Through blackest night, the light of you"

Across the sea the Angel longs
To hold her Mystic in her arms
The frozen trail of blood stained snow
Was drifted over long ago

With softest breath the Mystic sighs
His straightest path has lost align
Desiring what can never be
Surrendering loss to destiny:

"Exhale my longing take my all
Your patterns dance as moonlight falls
Fate's fickle hand has had her way
My Angel come to me I pray"

Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
As pouring drops the sadness seeps
The Mystic wanders lost once more
To search another distant shore

And all that's left as tide recedes
The new dawn's promise night concedes
As fallen Angel lonely stands
To follow foot trails in the sand

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "Desiring what can never be, surrendering loss to destiny" <-- oh how i loved those lines. so much emotion and power. this was a beautiful follow up from part one. the imagery portrayed in this is stunning. coupled with a flawless flow and written with such beauty and grace, you outdid yourself here. as for the ending, what can I say? it was amazing. in my opinion, this is superior to part one, and i'm certainly looking forward to reading part three.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love this poem!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Oh wow Debbie...

    "Prayers unanswered heaven weeps
    As pouring drops the sadness seeps
    The Mystic wanders lost once more
    To search another distant shore"

    My fave stanza of all and it was no easy feat to pick it out.
    You write so so beautifully..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    "Close your eyes, inhale my thoughts
    Quench my desire, no count the cost
    One beat alone, a dream of two
    Through blackest night, the light of you"
    Seems to say so much to me yet leaves me so alone......awesome 100/5...so beautiful....

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This poem is really awesome. Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it.