Eric, I thought this was a beautiful poem. It flowed really well & the rhymes were awesome. They didn't seem force at all. & deffinitley weren't cliche. This had a powerful , strong meaning! & It was so true..

Amazing , keep it up.

Bri.x

This poem was excellent great job

Wow this is really good! great job

~Kristina

Woah intense!!! I loved it nice job

Wow this was amazing ur soo talented ....sometimes i tihnk that too n i smoke pot :| sometimess .....or maby like 1 a week ahh dont get mad hahaha anyways i love ur poem erik it was fasinatiing

Fantastic! I loved the rhyming in this poem, it fit well together. 5/5

Yay, you wrote a new poem lol. This poem was great. It flowed really well. You wrote a very powerful piece here. 5/5

marcella

Hey hun. liked it alot, the wording, the flow, nothing was too forced. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

Realizing the truth,catching up with reality
Disappointment floods your mind, in misery

I liked especially those lines
It means you can write a good poem in 30-45 mins too:)

I think this is perfect! 5/5

I really like the rhyme scheme in your poems this one is another really good poem of yours 5/5 = ]

I liked this. Despite the stanzas being in a somewhat jumpy order, your words still seemed to flow really well. I enjoyed reading.

Wow amazing poem. I really liked the topic you wrote about. Only 30-45 minutes? Wow that is fast, but the poem turned out really great. It flowed well, but for some reason I didn't like these lines: I don't want to drown in the watter, I don't want to sink
Can you help me find the path to the missing link?" I don't know why though. I loved everything else about the poem. Keep it up! I think i'm going to add you to my favorites, because I really enjoyed reading this poem.

You seem very self-conscious of your work!
completely natural yes but try to kick the habit because your very good!

this is very rocky on rhyme and your vocab still amazes me.
originality is the ket. keep it up!

4.5

I'm finally commenting on one of your poems.. I may have been too lazy to comment your other ones, but this really deserves to be commented and I'm rating it a 5, it rhymed extremely well and I love it's message.

Wow! This was awesome! 30-45 minutes? Wow! I really enjoyed this, your writing is amazing, keep up the great work! 5/5

Very good poem but I dont think it is the joint you need to worry about it is your friend or who ever your talking about becouse I'm like a 4th generashion stoner an it's done nothing but good for me but hay I guess weed has differant effacts on people we'll any way keep writing if you get a chances I would love it if you could comminte some of my poems

I really enjoyed the first stanza of this piece, it was emotive and strong - but after that the poem kind of fell apart for me. The message was a little unclear, and it just seemed more like a brainstorm than a piece of art. The thoughts expressed were clever, but overall I don't think this fit well. You have potential, keep writing.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I really loved this poem. So manyu touching words. Although, the structure wasn't that good. You should maybe try to put the whole poem into stanzas that can be easily understood. Still a very good poem though!

.:CiNdY:.