Comments : Lipstick Mark

  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was a great poem! just has that X factor that you can't describe but it gives it that special something. I understand why it's one of your favorites. Great job! Truly beautiful...5/5 as always! :)
    ~Midnight Sun
    p.s. I was hoping you could comment on a couple of my newest poems...I miss your comments, cause they always seem to give me the best advice. I'd appreciate it girl. Thanks! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    This poem brought a smile to my face. The picture in my mind, just made me grin, Great job.

    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    It's a beautiful poem and quite sensual.
    I loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This is really cute. I loved it! Wow, the diction was awesome and unique, everything about this is fantastic!

  • 12 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Well done, my dear. A teasing little piece. Brought a smile. The rhythmn of the poem was outstanding.

    Great job.

  • 12 years ago


    OMG!!! wow..........................

    i cnt get over how inspiringly well this is writen..... my god its awsum i love it 5/5 much love .xx

  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    Hey great poem u wrote it so well great use of words and expression. keep it up hope u been good xx

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done Gem....can see why it's one of your favs! Love the imagery....great flow. All the best, Debbie

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is indeed a very sweet poem. Could feel the rising love. Very wonderfully written. Love could be so teasing sometimes.. ;o))

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    A beautifully written love poem. Very well done!

  • 12 years ago


    Thats really a romantic one! good write!


  • 12 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Great Job Gem. I loved it! Great flow and rhyme. Excellent! 5/5

    Ciao :)

  • 12 years ago

    by seana elyse

    Awsome, loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by IzL

    I really liek thie poem, too!
    kepp writtin'em

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Sweet poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Yuna

    You should be very proud of this poem. YOu did very good and I personally just loved it! It flowed like water, and blended like colours. I was captured by your poetry and hope to read more! Write oN!

  • 12 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wonderful and beautiful poem! Keep up the great work. You really used great detail in this poem. 5/5
    God Bless

  • 12 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    I like this poem its really neat :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ambah

    This is really good

  • 12 years ago


    Hunny, its been a while!
    woww! i miss u! and your poetry!
    lovely poem. i see why its your fave!
    love ittttt!