This was a great poem! Yeah...it just has that X factor that you can't describe but it gives it that special something. I understand why it's one of your favorites. Great job! Truly beautiful...5/5 as always! :)
~Midnight Sun
p.s. I was hoping you could comment on a couple of my newest poems...I miss your comments, cause they always seem to give me the best advice. I'd appreciate it girl. Thanks! :)

Gem
This poem brought a smile to my face. The picture in my mind, just made me grin, Great job.

Take care your friend Cindy

It's a beautiful poem and quite sensual.
I loved it.

This is really cute. I loved it! Wow, the diction was awesome and unique, everything about this is fantastic!

Gem,
Well done, my dear. A teasing little piece. Brought a smile. The rhythmn of the poem was outstanding.

Great job.
Jeannie

OMG!!! wow..........................

i cnt get over how inspiringly well this is writen..... my god its awsum i love it 5/5 much love .xx

Hey great poem u wrote it so well great use of words and expression. keep it up hope u been good xx

Nicely done Gem....can see why it's one of your favs! Love the imagery....great flow. All the best, Debbie

This is indeed a very sweet poem. Could feel the rising love. Very wonderfully written. Love could be so teasing sometimes.. ;o))

all the best and take care

A beautifully written love poem. Very well done!

Thats really a romantic one! good write!

luv

Great Job Gem. I loved it! Great flow and rhyme. Excellent! 5/5

Ciao :)

Awsome, loved it

I really liek thie poem, too!
kepp writtin'em

Sweet poem

You should be very proud of this poem. YOu did very good and I personally just loved it! It flowed like water, and blended like colours. I was captured by your poetry and hope to read more! Write oN!

Wonderful and beautiful poem! Keep up the great work. You really used great detail in this poem. 5/5
God Bless
<3Tayyy

I like this poem its really neat :) 5/5

This is really good

Hunny, its been a while!
woww! i miss u! and your poetry!
lovely poem. i see why its your fave!
love ittttt!
ily<3