Comments : You were never there

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Aww. this is sad.
    But it's a GREAT poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by LaughableHeartbreak

    Hey thanks for commenting on mine(:
    i like this, simple and straight foward.

  • ♥♥♥
    Wonderful work.

  • 11 years ago

    by just me

    I hope you won't miss me,
    I hope you won't regret,
    Just leave me to my darkness,
    And promise to forget.

    I like this. especially the last line, "promise to forget", i like that. It was a nice poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by XxbekkaxX

    I love this poem. its got a good rythem to it and i could really feel the emotions coiiming out of it 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dakota

    Your poems are great! I am 14 and yeah my poems could use a lot of advice! I will put more of my poems on tomorrow!

  • 11 years ago

    by michaela earp

    I like it, its beautiful in away i can't exactly explain . Im very sorry you had or do have to feel that kind of hate towards someone. It rememinds me of something I went through and I thank you for that.

  • 11 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    This poem seems as if it could be made into a song, if it isn't already intended to be a song... lol, I really like the message coming from this poem, great job

    ~Love Whitney

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Hey gurl....i know exzctly how you it sucks when you think that ppl arent there for you...i know how that feels....just talk to me if you need cuz ill be here for you....even if you dont know me at all.....i care about every living thing on this planet.....5/5

  • Wow!!! its rly rly good :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    I love this poem... i can totally relate to it... its exactly how i feel about my current boyfriend.... but unlike you... for some reason i dont want to leave... love's complicated... and it can hurt like hell... but youve got to try ur hardest to move on in life and try new things... and i think that that is what your doing... i just wish i could do the same...
    Great poem... keep ^ the good work and ill keep reading...

    Love always

    P.s please read some of my poems... it would really mean alot to me and i would greatly appreciate it.

  • 11 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    This is a really good poem,
    i can relate to it~
    Nice Job~! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Vanessa Ann

    I love this poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Ixora

    I love the blatant simplicity of this poem...i read a couple of ur other ones but i think this may be my're obviously a very talented writer


  • 10 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I luv this poem its cool as great job :)


  • 10 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I really enjoyed this poem and I believe it was well penned. Great job and keep up the awesome-ness work ... Lol ...

  • 10 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Excellent work. 5/5 from me. The rhyme worked well!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by MizzCici

    DAMN diz 1 iz so good i feel u on this it was expressedvery good and can relate i felt it keep up da good work!!!!!!check mine out sumtime and comment for me.............

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is beautifully well-written. you have done a very good job. the words were deep and emotional.
    keep up the good work.

    -Sarah A.

  • 10 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    You have an amzing way of writing <333 i love speaks to me <3