This is a really great and inspiring poem. Great job. =^_^=

Awe. This is really beautiful. It's so true & very inspiring. It flowed really well. And the rhymes were good. They didn't seem too forced. It all fit together really well.

Beautifully penned, Hun.

Bri x

Hey hun, i liked this alot! it was worded great and full of hope which really shined thru. i specially liked this part..
"But easy things are not enough.
Be inspired of how limitless the world is."
..amazing. well done babe.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Beautiful poem
makes so much meaning to me
5/5
keep writing...
love
amy

I don't actually know what to say brian, but wow,ive jus finished writting your poem i hope you check it out, you are amazing at writing poetry, and love to read what you write, i wish i was a good as u my closet poet, lol. to me this poem means alot of what i have wanted to do i dont know wheather you know other people but this touched me, sorry its so long.i actaully felt like crying readin that, you are a masive inspiration to me. 100/100 babe. cant get no better xxtake carexx
i love you xx

Nicely written great poem with a great message,
you are very talented. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

A poem with a truly amazing message. The flow of this poem was really great. I think you did a really good job writing this one! 5/5!

<3, Shades of Blue

Very inspiring. You did a wonderful job of portraying life as something precious, and reaching out to those who do not value their own. I especially liked the lines,
"You all have a reason to live.
All have something to give.
Sure life is tough.
But easy things are not enough."
I completely agree with the last two, the things that come easy in life aren't worth as much as those that come hard.

One thing, in line 2 it should be "too" tough.

Overall good job. I really liked it

A very reassuring message. It just might save a life. I think that you did an excellent job. The flow flawless, the message clear, and strong. It made me feel that you really care about the people you wrote it to. 5/5

Wow, amazing poem, very encouraging in so many ways! i just loved it, everyline was amazing and penned out very well

----tara

That was an excellent poem

and u sed u just stuff around with the poetry and write anything
i dont think you do
it seems that you put so much effort into it

p.s i dont even noe wat the word annihilation means but it still touched me 5/5 :P

OMG!!! i was not expecting something that well written and that strong from a user named Lucifer. There is the 1st lesson from your poem, don't judge a book by its cover.

You have written herein a poem that would give any person on their last tether hope and will, that alone is something any poet could and should be proud of. I dont know u, but im proud to have had the privalige to have read such commendable words.

5/5 ALL THE WAY LUCIFER!!!!!!!!

This is a very good poem... I LOVE IT!!!

I loved it very very much:):)
you are so right and every thing you wrote is true i loved it its a good goooooood poem:):)

so i will give ya 5/5 coz you worth it:):):)
keep up the good work:):)

khuloodan:):)
smile all the time:)):)..

I loved it very very much:):)
you are so right and every thing you wrote is true i loved it its a good goooooood poem:):)

so i will give ya 5/5 coz you worth it:):):)
keep up the good work:):)

khuloodan:):)
smile all the time:)):)..

Good job!!!

Hey!!! Whoa I LOVEEE it. It's like.. opposite of what some people write about. I might hang this on my wall and just read it everyday. it's so amazing! keep writing man. Loove it. 100/5!!! :)
~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~

This poem is amazing
I like it a lot and the rhyme is great
Take good care of u
Keep up the good work
Best regards,Michelle x x x
55/ for sure

Love it its really nice!

Wow. This is the best poem that I have read today. It really intrigued me, while reading it. I like this poem alot, and I hope kim did too. you are a great writer. Keep up