If Everyone Cared

by aDORKable x3   Apr 1, 2007


Dear Mister President, I have some words to say.
Will you listen to me or turn your head away?
I'm nothing special, but I speak my mind.
And this is something that I have come to find.

If everyone cared, then no one would die.
Did you ever stop and think about why?
People are killing and people are crying;
All because some people are lying.

If everyone cared, would we still be fighting?
If we cared, then I wouldn't be writing.
Stop the war; get our forces home.
We can't deal with being alone.

Men torn from families; women left alone.
They're being hardened by each bomb thrown.
Help our families, please bring them back.
Stop the fighting and the attacks.

Don't you see that if everyone cared,
No one would lie; no one would dare.
Hurtful words would never be spoken;
Leaving people with hearts, broken.

If everyone cared, no one would be dead.
We wouldn't have to worry; we wouldn't have to dread.
All the stories on the news, filled with scary sorrows.
All the women and the men, scared about tomorrow.

Dear Mister President, Please lend me a moment or two.
I know that you have the time to stop what we go through.
Look at our lives; we are all living scared.
It would be different, If Everyone Cared.

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If Everyone Cared; By: Ciao - Oh Dearest Ciao, how do you continue to amaze me so? Hahaha. Once again Darling, I loved your work. It was political, and sad at the same time with a little zest of inspiration lol, I truly did admire this piece and your talent continued to blossom with this one, great work. Heartchuu.
SPELLING - 3/3
GRAMMAR - 4.5/5
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 4/5
TOTAL - 16.5

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  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is sooooooo cool i always go on about this in my poems lol im like an old an though. You pull it off a lot easier than me it seems like all words fall into place :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Your poem is so touching and soo sad .. I love it.. I agree with ur poem too .. well done 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Hahaa I noticed you put my little marking guide there lol, you'er too cute. Anyways, as I said in that I loved this. The president really needs something like this to set him on the right track haha.

    heartchuu.

  • 10 years ago

    by UnwrittenTragedy

    Amazing, so true and i know EXACTLY where your coming from. Love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    It would be different if everyone cared. This pretty much summed up it all. Good work, it flowed really well and I loved the topic.
    xXAnother Crystal Tear FallsXx