Ring Of Fire [Glosa Verse]

by aDORKable x3   Jan 13, 2008

Love is a burning thing
And it makes a fiery ring
Bound by wild desire
I fell into a Ring of Fire
People say that I'm too young to feel this way -
"Wait until you're older." is exactly what they say.
But I disagree because love has no limits -
You can only see that when you're truly in it.
The Ring Of Fire - My Ring Of Fire.
Just like the song that I always sing...
People just don't seem to want to understand
Our feelings and love, as we stand hand in hand.
Try as I might, I can't explain the happiness you bring.
"...Love is a burning thing."

My love for you, I cannot explain,
Try as I might, words are just too plain.
Feelings are just that; they're meant to be felt.
What words could describe the way you make me melt?
The Ring Of Fire - My Ring Of Fire.
Just like this song that I always sing...
The melody and words stay stuck in my head.
As I fall asleep thinking of you in my bed.
Love is my burning thing,
"...And it makes a fiery ring."

l dream of you almost every night,
Then I wake up holding my pillow too tight.
I wish you were here to wipe my tears away;
To laugh and talk and listen to what I have to say.
The Ring Of Fire - My Ring Of Fire.
I heard that passion fuels the eternal fire -
It burns within my very heart,
Even though we're both miles apart.
If I said I didn't care, you could call me a liar
"...Bound by wild desire"

Nothing could mean more to me that you do -
Even after everything we've been through.
Good times and bad, and everything else in-between,
You were always there helping me live my dream.
The Ring Of Fire - My Ring Of Fire.
Me heart needs you; it's you I desire -
I couldn't imagine myself without you
If that ever happened I wouldn't know what to do
You are my life, my love, and my ultimate desire.
"...I fell into a Ring of Fire."


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  • 15 years ago

    by damont

    I haven't commented on your poems in a while but you reach alot of good points in this poem and i like it. it is though a bit confusing in the beginning is the first stanza a different poem?
    anyway its excellent i like the way you expressed everything i love the way you described your love and eternal passion keep writing this is good

  • 15 years ago

    by xox terra oxo

    This was a beautiful poem dear. i love how you put it together. the rythem in the poem flowed through with out having many disruptions (but those are mostly cause of my father lol) but still its a great poem dear. <3 good work