Comments : Daddy's little girl

  • 10 years ago

    by Krysten

    This is truley a beautiful poem. i liked it alot. it kinda hits home for me b/c i went like almost 7 years without seeing my daddy, so yeah. it was beautifuly writen as well, you were able to get your point across, in just a few stanzas. I loved it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jubail

    Really good beautiful poem. i really loved it

  • Wonderful poem. Sad. The flow was excellent and the structure was great. Good job 5/5

    :Sarah:

  • 10 years ago

    by Katie

    I really like this. The flow was good, and the meaning was very strong. Great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by myblackfairytale

    This poem is really good and it is exactly explaining me
    i have a drunk for a father who i havent seen in about 9 yrs or longer great work

  • 10 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Very touching. Word choice worked well with the mood of this poem. Really paints a picture in the readers' mind. Definitely a great read! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Omg.. i love it your style is very good.. keep up the good work..

  • 10 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    I love this poem, especially the story that goes along with it. Sorry for including this in your comments, but I wanted to remind you about your contest. Thanks!

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked the story of this poem i thought it was really sad and emotional but a great read. The style was amazing. This was an enjoyable read. Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww this is an adorable poem... the simplicity of the words emphasizes the "little girl" aspect of the poem... the second to last stanza doesn't rhyme.. but other than that the rest is flawless .. from word choice to flow... fantastic job :D

  • 10 years ago

    by kayla

    This is really good. so cute and meaningful =)
    i can relate because i lost my mum when i turned six . . i have a few poems about it too . .
    but anyway, nice poem.
    keep it up, love kayla xoxox

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The ending made me want to go back and read between the lines. The title and the begining line of each quatrain accented the subject which climaxed with the object of the authors affection

  • 10 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Awe.. adorable. its so cute. haha im a daddies girl. XD

    the ending is quite sad.. =[

    5/5 excellent

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow great write. I loved the repetition, the flow was very good as well as the structure. Great Job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Thomas

    That was really good

  • 10 years ago

    by sasha Rashell hall

    Awww this poem is great im so sorry that you dont get to see your daddy anymore i know i would die if i didnt have my daddy here with me

  • 10 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Great write ! good flow, and carfully chosen words! loved the outline!
    ... sad but great unexpected ending!
    kirsty
    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing write! I really loved the repetition of "Daddy's Little Girl", it made the poem stand out more. The flow was flawless & overall it was wonderful. Though the ending was kind of heartbreaking to read. =[ Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    I really like this poem. I understand how you feel.I have gone alomst two years without seeing my dad.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.