Wow great job!!..it was soooo sad..almost made me cry!!!!
umm i gave it a 5/5 b/c i totaly loved it..but i think ---just a suggesion-- that u can fix line 12 by saying
"So he ended his misery hanging off a rope"...just a suggestion......great job tho!!!
I don't even know what I could possibly say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about this piece...
This was beautifully written, despite being relatively short you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion, and the imagery you portrayed in this was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures in my mind.
The flow was FLAWLESS throughout this piece, and that ending..oh wow. Filled with such intensity and power that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.
This is just...wow. I love this. This is going into my favourite poems. Definietly.
A beautiful write, with such a deep message behind the written words.