A million times

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Apr 11, 2007


This was wriiten for a class i am taking in school,
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A million times Ive needed you
A million times Ive cried

*Your love for me so true
Something you never could hide*

If my love could have saved you
You never would have died

*It was my time, my fate, and my karma
I’m sorry my soul mate, you were my blessing*

In life I loved you dearly
In death I love you silently

*My love for you is never ending
In heaven I love you still*

In my heart you had a place
Not another soul can replace

*My heart at rest still loves you
You have passed loves true test*

It broke my heart to loose you
But you did not go alone

*Although my body lies beneath this stone
Your love for me has always shown*

For part of me went with you
The day god called you home

*Your heart and soul are still safe with me
Till you join me in heavens mighty glee*

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  • 11 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    WOW... i really feel this one aye... loss blows, but you get on with life. Im sorry to hear you lost someone dear to you though... good write never the less

  • 11 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Nice ryhming, i really like it.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Uhm I like the way you rhyme some stanza :) this is so sweet I like it! it flowed well! so.. I'll give it a 5/5! :) good job!

    Hey sorry for the late comment by the way

  • 11 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Ithe only thing bad i noticed was the annoying things that replace apostrophes on this site, if u want it to be perfect n all... anyway amazing poem,you express how you feel with such clarity and i love the sincerity behind your well penned words.

  • 11 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    Nice i rally liked this one