You will never...

by Poetic Grunt   Apr 16, 2007


You will never know
how much your words rekindle my soul
You will never know
How every time our eyes meet time seems to slow
You will never know
These feelings I have for you
You will never know
How much I love you and thats the truth
You will never see
The feelings I have for you in my heart
You will never see
The ties that bind wont let us be broken apart
You will never see
My silver/White moonlit romance
You will never see
The courage it takes to take the chance
You will never know
How hard it is not to show the tears in my eyes
You will never know
How i believe in you through all of their lies
You will never know
How much I long to embrace you
You will never know
All that I have been through
all that you will see
Is the darkness inside of me
Because I have never seen
An angel of light that gleams so white
And at the end in the dead of night
I pray that the lord that somehow the time will be right

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  • 15 years ago

    by LittleMissReality

    Wow, that was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Love the poem. It had a great flow and kinda surprised me how well it meshed together. It would be nice to put it in stanzas but it still is very well written.

    -Daniel

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh my gad, that is totally so amazing, it fits exactly how i am feeling for a girl atm. Like exactly. oh my god. a little freaky lol. Its amazing, the rhyming and structure. just a little advice though, ti gets a little confusing when rreading, you could seperate it into stanzas or something. just to make it a little clearer. 5/5

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Wow. I loved it. Great poem. First, I liked it when you changed the 'you will never know' to 'you will never see' but then when you continued saying that, it somehow got old.
    But still it was great. Very touching. You really seem to love that person.. Nicely done.

    Keep it up

    5/5

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