It was different, not bad, just different, you are a good writer, difficult to understand everything that you're saying. Keep writing. =)
-Ally

It's likie a terminator style ending. outstanding and riveting

your servant:
david

Ummm.. I'm kind of lost as to what exactly the meaning of this poem is...Umm.. The flow seemed to be nice..I'm just left confused!! If I had understood I think it would've been more enjoyably..lol
5/5...Tyanna

This is another great one by you, even i had to read it three times to get the picture. but you have done a great job dude, keep it up

Wow this was really different.. I'm not exactally sure what it meant exactally but I loved it all the same.. It wasnt overly long which made it all the better. Nice write.

Very different, I like it a lot. I like poems which stand out for their uniqueness and their ability to be extremely different.

Nice job.

You choose interesting topics to write about and interesting titles
but I dont fully understand the meanin of this poem
its good tho

Yeah.. so your kinda obsessed with the whole machine thing.. lol.. its interesting... the flow of this poem is nice and the word useage is good too.. however i dont really understand it that well how does the beging of march lead into the march of the machines.. lol sorry maybe im just really slow :]P

The poem is GREAT!...lol...but yeah different..very different...but i loved the subject used..n the vivid description n your choice of words...unique write though..but yet...perfect!
xxPoojaxx

Uhm.. you really write unique poems, I like it. Keep it up man.

I think it flowed nicely, I really like the originality of it, good job!

Interesting write, I liked it, very different from what I'm used to, short and to the point.

Peace, Joe

Wow... oh my god, I am speechless... The title caught my attention and the poem utterly impressed me. You managed to say so much within such short piece which is remarkable and this is truly amazingly deep and refreshing, different than anything I've read before. The imagery and profound lines left me in awe. This piece fits my taste for poetry exactly: It's metaphorical and unique, with breathtaking descriptions. I can't find anything to critique here, the message is conveyed in fantastic way. I like how you connected the first line with the ending line, that gave me impression of an endless cycle as a frame to the essence of poem. Overall, greatly written piece, truly memorable, it is certainly going to my favorites.

Ok i don't know if this is supposed to be humorous but it was to me... the title is great and it kind of made me chuckle through the whole piece... sounds to me like everyones the same, and your saying your tired of it... and i totally agree... 5/5

This poem has a very deep point to it
the free flowing words which is no what I will focus on at your request delivers an unrest in the demonstration of mans inability to remain passive it the passion of disagreement, or in least how it makes me feel