My friend, Bree, is a short person with a big heart.
Though she cries, she'll never let you fall apart.
Her boyfriend is Donavon, he makes her smile.
I've known her since second grade; That's a while.
Standing 4 feet 9 inches, but still stands her ground.
Cutest little friend to have that will keep you around.
She loves her Doon ey and Bourke like a child.
Give her a lot of candy, this little one will go wild.
Short as she is, she is a bigger friend than you know.
Messy people don't stand a chance, when she is on the go.
This sounds like my BFF since pre-K, short and hyper. :) Now, to the poem. The flow was a bit rough in places, and a lot of the rhyming sounds really forced. You used a lot of detail about your friend in this poem with limited space however, so good job on that. 4/5.