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by BeautifulxMess Aug 29, 2008
Love, romance /
You're the shadow that watches over me.
I am the reason you're were you want to be.
Nothing will make me fall when you're around.
When I am with you, my feet stay on the ground.
I love when you hold me to your body so tight.
When I am scared you tell me that it's alright.
I've never felt this way about anyone before.
Everything you do keeps me wanting more.
Making love to you is like drifting in an abyss.
I'm falling forever into your everlasting kiss.
Your eyes say that you will always love me.
And your kiss says that we will forever be.*This poem is called Unwritten Love, because there is no such word to describe what we have except for...unexplained love..in other words. Unwritten. :)
by Beautiful Forever
I absolutely loved this poem! I would've said it was perfect but, "were" is "where" lol. Minor mistake that's not your fault.
The flow was great, I love the emotion shown, the concept is easy to relate to. Very great write.
5/5... Keep it up!