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by BeautifulxMess Sep 12, 2008
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm lost in the world of a boy that abides.
He loves me with everything he holds inside.
Though I never find myself back home.
I love loosing myself in his eyes.In his eyes is where I want to be.
With his face being the only thing I see.
When I feel like there's no moving on.
I feel those emerald eyes looking at me.
It was a sweet poem, but I've read it before, many many times before.
by Beautiful Forever
The emotion is definitely there. I really liked the way this was written. Short, sweet, and full of emotion. That's the best way any poem can be. The flow was a little shaky but nothing major. Word choice was brilliant. And the concept was decent.