Wow this is really good. you did such a great job writing these lyrics. i can picture it as a song. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

I love your song it was really sweet and very nice loved the flow of it all. you have some real talent there! :) please check out my poems and tell me what you think.

Nice one
again you have done a great job
keep it up, as im sure you can be one of the best poet here on P&Q

This is a great song! very deep. i love the chorus and the bridge a lot! very good. i would love to hear it oneday

xo kisses xo

This was preaty good except I am never really good at reading songs without the music cause it throws me off.. But this was preaty good from what I could tell. nice job.. the chorus was my favorite part.

Again...another great poem!! I have only done three of yours but they have all deserved a 5/5!! you have great talent!! I loved the course!!

Great song, it was really sweet, you're really talented!
sky

I think that it is awesome. It is a great write and has a rhythem to it:) Another 5/5.

This was so beautiful.
The first verse is a great opener, and from there on it just gets better.
The flow is good throughout, and I enjoyed the repetition you used, I think it gives it impact.

This was amazing..i loved it, one of the best ive ever read. You have such talent...loving read yours. 5/5 for sure

Another great piece. for a song it is very nicely done. Keep up the good work. You have great talent 5/5

Hey,
Well this song does sound really good. What genre is it sang like?
Anywyas i loved the overall way the lyrics are written. I lvoed the courus, and i can tell this song would have a steady rhythem to it. The lyrics were quite sweet. Its an overall good lyrics and i owuld like ot hear this osng. It sounds great! :) As a poem or a lyric i think you should of used punctuation. Other then that its a god poem. Im sorry about taking so long to return the comments. Take care and keep writing! xx

Of course i'm intersted in hearing it...could you send it to me, please, please?

the lyrics are really beautiful, i absolutely loved them...
10/5 again, if i could... =)

*isabel*

This is a very pretty and heartfelt poem/song. I like the repitition, and the chorus fit very nicely into the writing. Fabulous job, 5/5.

Excelent song you are a fantastic writter and you should definitly keep doing it you are talented no question

WOW this is really good! I would love to hear it! you're really talented! another 5/5! as always! :) good job!

It is a beautiful song i would love to hear it!