Comments : More Than Useless

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is great! it's a different type of poem, which makes it even better! it had a nice flow to it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I didnt find this poem to be weird it greatly portrayed emotion throughout it. Was different but nice to read.

    Afraid to appear outside the closet
    For she feels her feelings hopeless
    Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
    That her love is more than useless

    That stanza was my favorite and definitly got my attention. Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Wow i love this poem. So well written. Ã┬Łou have talent!! keep it up. xx Chrissie

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The wording was eliminated and flow was good..you have a good imaginery really...keep up the good work
    Take care
    Laura

  • Wow, I loved this poem.. No words can describe the feeling it gives you. I think my favorite stanza was..
    "It is true love this girl seeks
    Yet it is hard love she disguises
    Her life filled with twists and turns
    Her life overflows with surprises"

    Filled with twists and turns.. It caught my eye right off the bat, it was beautiful, keep up the good work, when I started reading it I thought it was kinda going to be slow, but it draws you into it, That is what a writer is supposed to do.And the flow was dead on as well as the rhyme. Good job. 5/5
    Ally

  • 10 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excellent poem. i loved your rhymes and your use of words. beautiful. the whole poem was adictive and well structured. i loved it no matter the subject. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Afraid to appear outside the closet
    For she feels her feelings hopeless
    Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
    That her love is more than useless
    I think I love this part the best. You are talented. nicely written, good flow, an all in all good write 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I feel this poem was very skillfully written. The revelations are shy and subtle while flowing flawlessly it seems to reveal true feeling.

  • 10 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wow wonderful poem. this expresses love for some one out there and thats what matters. you are very good. full of emotion and feelings. keep up the good work 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, great poem! You're talented :D

    Yet her smiles are still picture perfect
    Her looks are still innocent and pure
    Her proper self, she hinders
    This secret she will have to endure

    This was a great stanza! I liked this part best :D 5/5 from me!

  • 10 years ago

    by David Munoz

    I don't know how you think this is weird, and you have some real talent. You kept it short and simple and, overall, it was very good. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Wonderful poem. I don't think that it is weird:) keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Omg this is sooo cool! i loved it best poem I've read all day ncie work flow and rhythm and everything was right on

  • 10 years ago

    by Curry

    I actually thought this was wonderfully written. 5/5 from me!

  • 10 years ago

    by tyanna

    I loved the last stanza!! This poem was wonderfully written..I really liked it!! Another 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Nice work. Beautifully set and I didn't find it weird at all. Keep it up. :)
    cheers, josh

  • 10 years ago

    by Julienne

    Your poem seemed strange to me at first, and i couldnt grasp it, but as i persevered and kept reading, i really liked it, it was well written and so powerful, i think it is one of the best ones i hav read as a love poem.. as u usually dont like to read this categorie... thanks for posting it, i really enjoyed reading it

  • 10 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This poem is...wow

    this poem is amazing...it flows and moves so smoothly and the mysterious vib i felt when i read it

    wow...i like this one

    good job!!!!!
    keep writing!
    ~shannon~

  • 10 years ago

    by Synh

    Stop downplaying your poems when you're done writing them.
    Anyway, I liked this. The flow was good as was the use of vocabulary. I liked how you never came and said what was so imperfect or useless about the girl. A good mystery in a poem is hard to find. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautiful :) its not weird at all! well penned! good job! 5/5!