Wow, I loved this poem.. No words can describe the feeling it gives you. I think my favorite stanza was..
"It is true love this girl seeks
Yet it is hard love she disguises
Her life filled with twists and turns
Her life overflows with surprises"
Filled with twists and turns.. It caught my eye right off the bat, it was beautiful, keep up the good work, when I started reading it I thought it was kinda going to be slow, but it draws you into it, That is what a writer is supposed to do.And the flow was dead on as well as the rhyme. Good job. 5/5
Afraid to appear outside the closet
For she feels her feelings hopeless
Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
That her love is more than useless
I think I love this part the best. You are talented. nicely written, good flow, an all in all good write 5/5
Your poem seemed strange to me at first, and i couldnt grasp it, but as i persevered and kept reading, i really liked it, it was well written and so powerful, i think it is one of the best ones i hav read as a love poem.. as u usually dont like to read this categorie... thanks for posting it, i really enjoyed reading it
Stop downplaying your poems when you're done writing them.
Anyway, I liked this. The flow was good as was the use of vocabulary. I liked how you never came and said what was so imperfect or useless about the girl. A good mystery in a poem is hard to find. 5/5