I love your writing! there is so much meaning in what u say. this is all very true. Great Job once again. u are being added to my favs.

I really like how you write poetry on things that matter worldwide. It's always nice to hear a fresh voice being outspoken.

Excellent write. I really enjoyed it.

Excellent work!
This poem was great and very well written!
5/5!!!

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I love your work! Very well written! Thanks for commenting and voting for my poems too! If you continue to do so, so will I! =) thanks! Great poem with tons of meaning!

This is really good.. i just wish that everything that happend at the end of your poem could really come true.. that would make it so much better.. anyway 5/5

Wow! That took me aback! I loved the mental imagery at the begining with the witch and the catand the supernatural element and then there was a huge twist and the mood changed totally.

welldone, not easily done x

Slavery
poverty.
^They don't rhyme. It throws the flow off.
Only flaw I found. Well done. The poem really imaged out the war in Iraq and let people know it's no joke out there. Well done with the discription. Keep up teh writing!
<3Tay God bless 5/5
^__^ily

Turning to the lord, what is their fate?
After its done, where shall she be placed?
wuzz reealy good i liked the hole thing tho
4/5

Nice twist *nods* i liked it a lot, but i just think the rhyming could have been a little bit more sophisticated.

This poem does a really awesome job of creating a visual. it deff has substance and it tells a story. you are very good with words. stellar job.
xxoo darling
-jess

Def a good change!!

i loved it. ^_^

kept me reading right the way through. =]

5/5!! excellent writing.

keep going the way your going!
xxx

Hm..I like it. the first part sounds like it would be good for holloween. lol. but the way you finished it was awesome. and it would really be cool if the world was like that (at peace). you know? awesome poem. 5/5 and thanx for commenting on my work.

I like this one, good rhyming and easy to see visions from it. Thank you for the comment.

"Out come the soldiers who are in Iraq,
The people who died over there all come back.

The little old man who lives alone,
Is helped by the lady who walks him home.

People speak freely and can finally see,
They can speak up with the curse of world peace."

^ I loved those lines.
You did an outstanding job with this poem. It was so amazing, and most of it imaginable.

Keep up the great work, sweetie.
5/5

Odd but good

Hey!..Great poem!!...i liked this 1!!...u've done a great job!..Kp it up!!
xxPoojaxx

Er.. Wow!
That was so different yet it seemed to.. out there!
I can't explain it, it was like you took the thoughts of everyone and made them into a poem..
It was excellent!
5/5
*Gem*

I love this poem. The beginning was odd, and I wondered where it was going. But the ending is AMAZING! I don't understand the last line, however. How is world peace a curse?

Different but enjoyable. Wasnt expecting this at all. Nice story behind it was suprising. Well done for the effort u put into this. ~mel

Haha. i liked the little comic book sound effects. they made the poem come to life, in a sense (: