If the world thinks its wrong to love you
F**k the world and all the people in it.
You gave me reason
To believe in myself
That someone like you could love me.
It's been torn and ripped away.
Now I know true love isn't real.
You have showed me this
With your coldness towards me
the hurtful things you say.
Is it you are trying to push me away?
I wont go
You cant make me
I'm still here
Standing strong for you
No matter what you say or do to me.
I will always be there for you.
Could this be the true meaning of "I love you?"
Although the structure of the poem isn't great.. who cares man? the way you end your poems is just really remarkable! i got tongue tied when you said "No matter what you say or do to me, I'll always be there for you, could this be the true meaning of I love you?" wow if someone said this to me.. I'd melt! another great piece!
... i added this to my favorites, i really like your poems because you seem to be able to say exactly what you mean and it is still beautiful. i wish i could do that.
it flowed so smoothly and you have a totally wonderful style. 5/5