I thought the title of this poem was very eye catching it almost makes the reader stop and check it out. The imagery in this piece was very good and I could see it play out in my head like a movie. Excellent job once again 5/5 GG23
"For I am like a ghost
Who sees but is never seen"
^^ My favourite part of this piece.
I found those two lines to hold so much power and meaning, they really stood out to me.
I enjoyed this, despite most of the piece not rhyming, I found it to have very good flow, and the ending was beautifully created, such passion and hope, while the writing itself was filled with such beauty and elegance.