Comments : She's My Mom

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Sweet, I bet your mother is happy and proud to have you post a poem about her. The flow was good, the word choice was alright, and the emtion were strong 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by a great poet.
    it is really well written as yes our moms deserve even more than that from us, i like the way you are telling us what is your mom to you, so beautifuly done. you always amaze me with your words. Happy mother s day to all of the moms.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    I love the repition "she is my" through out in your poem love you mum. always. take care

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem from you..lovely work...your mom must be very proud to have a wonderful child like you...excellent work!!.lovely,meaningful,intense and perfect....Happy mother's day to all the lovely mothers...
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww YAY!
    I love my mom as well.
    I think you did a great job
    Showing how amazing
    moms can be.
    I love this poem!
    Great dedication

  • 10 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Great poem i hope ur mom liked it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I liked it.
    I'm not much into non-rhyming poems, but the fact that you can write so highly about your mother is enough for me.
    You could feel the emotion, though the flow lacked a bit.
    Nicely done, over all.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some o my poems.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a great poem dedicated to im sure a beautiful lady. I liked how it was none ryhming but still held strong emotion which was portrayed nicely.Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by STEVE

    This is a special poem , I lost my mum when I was 19 she was a very special person I miss her everyday Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is so sweet ;) I bet your mom really enjoyed reading this one. Anyway I don't like short poems but this one is beautiful well done! It flowed well too. 5/5! keep up the good work!

  • 10 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    This was sweet. good job.
    Bree

  • 10 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It's awesome. I'm a little late though. It's father's day. Well it's about to come up soon. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    This piece endears me completely. I wish my mother was there to witness my growth.

    A very sweet tribute, nonetheless.

    -Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful!
    Such a beautiful dedication, filled with so much meaning and emotion, I'm sure this means a lot to your mother.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Gosh, i wish i could say the same about my mum.. Very well written
    5/5
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Nicely penned, very sweet and emotional.
    My favorite lines are:
    -She is my angel and my witness;
    Through all my ups and downs!-
    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was a really sweet and touching poem. You wrote it really well. Nice flow, structure and rhymes. Beautiful write! 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Sweet... You expressed emotions greatly and you wrote this piece beautifully.
    She is my angel and my witness;
    Through all my ups and downs!
    ^this two lines are greatest. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This is a simple poem really but you made it extra ordinary sweet. i love it.. your so sweet to write a poem for your mom. great poem.