Wow, i really liked it , it was a great transition from the first part, and i liked how you made it like a repeated occurance of history, its very nice, but now how are you going to finish it all off? perhaps a third part when you are ready, and thanks a ton for the whol dedication thing at the end, it made me feel speacial

Wow.. the Process seems to go on and on.. This was another great write.. I feel sorry for her. shes had a hard life.. anyway Keep up the great work.5/5

Ahhhh i'm hooked just write a book lol this is intense its so emotional and im getting closer and closer to crying everytime. Your talent is shining its hard to write sequals and make them run to well together like you have, well done!! can't wait to read more you've got me hooooookeeedddd!!!

Great second part. It is like it is begaining to go full circle everything seems to happen again. I loved it as much as the first part. 5/5

This is even better than the first i really enjoyed it.5/5

This is a fantastic Piece I really enjoy this keep of the great work Plot121

This my dear, is amazing.
It just blew me away.
The opening was so powerful, really pulls the reader into the poem and from there on it just gets better and better.
The imagery you used was marevouslly done, I could picture it happening in my mind, and once again I really liked the ending.

Wow great imagery created in this poem! I enjoyed reading it! And now she bore a baby.. A very good part 2! I'm going to read part 3 now! well done! kepe it up! 5/5!

Wow, great flow to this one.. loving it, i love to read poems about think kind of thing 5/5

Excellent poem ,very good, sad and i loved every word,feel the pain, but as for the feeling of being abused it never goes away, great job,keep it up ,your friend Tracy