Amazing, so sweet, i'm sure it will bring your mother to tears :). definitely another 5/5!
today's my sweet 16, and you'll never guess what my b/f got me for my bday... you're book!!!! A Faded Love, it's sitting right next to me! I was so happy, he knew i had wanted it for a while!! I've just started reading it, but of course i loved it :D!! i'll let you know how i like it (even though i'm gonna love it) as i read it! i'll talk to you later!
Truly mother's is the most special person in our life coz w/out them we are not also here in the world... so its our responsibilities to give them back our love as their daughter's.... great showing ur love to ur mom, and happy mother's day also to ur mom... love it! 5/5
Wow, so touching!! This paints a pricture of the relationship I've always wanted to have with my mom. It brought tears to my eyes!!
Everything was perfect...the choice of words, structure, EVERYTHING!! So so touching! I'm sure your mom will love it!! 5/5
Aww..that is such a touching poem, I love it! I'm still working on one I wrote for my mom, haven't gotten a chance to fully complete it and be satisfied. I love this poem though, you never fail to disappoint with your works! Congrats on getting the book published, I want to do the same but don't know where to start! :)
This was a really beautiful poem i have no way to describe this it was truly astonishing. The reader being I, can feel how much emotion was put deep into this poem and felt it came straight from the heart. Well done on portraying this masterpiece it was amazingly written, a tribute to im sure a very amazing lady. Well done~mel
Good deal dude. i like the last 2 lines, but i can really relate to almost dieng, and my mother fighting for me. i had chronic athesma as a child.
maybe change the last 2 lines of 3rd stanz, happieness 2x is scratchy.