Comments : My Mother

  • 11 years ago

    by freshta

    With my teary eyes i say happy mother's day to all of those great moms in this world. I know how much you love your mom...

  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    Amazing, so sweet, i'm sure it will bring your mother to tears :). definitely another 5/5!

    today's my sweet 16, and you'll never guess what my b/f got me for my bday... you're book!!!! A Faded Love, it's sitting right next to me! I was so happy, he knew i had wanted it for a while!! I've just started reading it, but of course i loved it :D!! i'll let you know how i like it (even though i'm gonna love it) as i read it! i'll talk to you later!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sydney

    Awh. I like it. It had a deep emotion to it XD. Really good poem. I give it a 5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Truly mother's is the most special person in our life coz w/out them we are not also here in the world... so its our responsibilities to give them back our love as their daughter's.... great showing ur love to ur mom, and happy mother's day also to ur mom... love it! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    Happy mother's day my dear mom,
    You are truly the greatest mother.
    I hope to see your smile forever,
    If you are ever sad, I die rather.

    wow awesome!!!! man its so great work. i loved you poem ittouched my heart. good work

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent poem dedicated to your mother...sure she'll be glad to have a wonderful son like up the good work...this poem is fulled with love towards your mother...Great work man!!

  • Wat a great poem, of all the poem so far i have read i loved this best happy mother day to all the wonderful mothers and to urs as well.

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Such a beautiful poem for [as it seems] a wonderful mother. It's great to know that you appreciate your mother and what she does for you. This poem was simply wonderful to read. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    OMG WOW! wallah gryam Goran its really good thats why we have them! Dast Xosh!

  • 11 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    The ending was a little of flow but it was such a heart felt poem, you must really appreciate your mother, most people take people close for granted you dont lol:D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    Very nice it had a number of exsamples to say why she was so special to you and all it all it was a nice write Plot121

  • 11 years ago

    by christina

    Thatrs such a great poems!!!!1 i love it!!! 50000000000000000000000/5

  • 11 years ago

    by tyanna

    Wow, so touching!! This paints a pricture of the relationship I've always wanted to have with my mom. It brought tears to my eyes!!
    Everything was perfect...the choice of words, structure, EVERYTHING!! So so touching! I'm sure your mom will love it!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by skynerraw

    This is so this shows how special your mom is to you.....very nice, touching, heartfelt poem......5/5!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Aww..that is such a touching poem, I love it! I'm still working on one I wrote for my mom, haven't gotten a chance to fully complete it and be satisfied. I love this poem though, you never fail to disappoint with your works! Congrats on getting the book published, I want to do the same but don't know where to start! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Thats so special, I have a strong relationship with my mum too, It's such a special poem, you have worded it so gently and beautifully! I hope you do see her smile forever!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a really beautiful poem i have no way to describe this it was truly astonishing. The reader being I, can feel how much emotion was put deep into this poem and felt it came straight from the heart. Well done on portraying this masterpiece it was amazingly written, a tribute to im sure a very amazing lady. Well done~mel

  • Great poem.
    It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
    It was beautifully penned 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I thought this was very good.. it rhymed and flowed good. and its cute because you wrote it for your mom.. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Good deal dude. i like the last 2 lines, but i can really relate to almost dieng, and my mother fighting for me. i had chronic athesma as a child.
    maybe change the last 2 lines of 3rd stanz, happieness 2x is scratchy.

    still superb though sir.