Walking

by The Pessimistic Peabody   May 14, 2007


What is life like on the other side?
Buy me a ticket and I'll go for the ride
Can't trade much but my empty soul
But I'll bargain with the devil if he'll let me go

Won't miss the world and they won't miss me
Just a single girl in a people sea
I cried all my tears, laughed all I can laugh
Now I'm up and walking on the beaten path

I got a couple sins God just won't forgive
So I'm wasting his time if I'm trying to live
My efforts to repent aren't working too well
So I'm making HIS job easy and I'm walking to hell

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Oh wow..this is some powerful work..... its really amazing.... i was drawn in by reading the first few lines..

    great job and EXCELLENT ending. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very different peice..yet i liked the way it ws penned..filled wth emotions...it had a meaning behind..n i liked tht=)
    Good write..lol..another 5/5 as always!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The last line was my favorite. this poem was amazing. really the flow was great, the word choice was exceptional, and the emtion was powerful . keep up the good work, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    Wow. This is a very unique write. The flow was great and the wording was perfect. I like the meaning of it and the way you put it into words. Great job...5/5
    Tyanna

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me

    This is nice. it could have better structure though but otherwise 5/5. great work once again

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