Small Smile(double Haiku)

by BeautifulxMess   May 15, 2007


Heat melts my fair skin
As the sun taunts my mercy.
Sweat secretes slowly.

Flowers bloom around
Green grass begs for it's water.
Summer is small smile.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    You should've made this longer.
    I actually want to hear more of it.
    I love Takas and Haikus.
    They're very deep to me.
    I can actually see sweat in this.
    I can see you walking around sweating
    Looking around and seeing flowers.
    Wonderful imagery, dearest.
    Well done :]