Beautifully written poem. You created truly wonderful imagery through it.
"The world becomes dark
The sky begins to spark
The clouds start to fight
Sending us sparkling light"
^ I really like this stanza.
Great imagery so very vivid your words were descriptive and powerful giving an overall stunning picture painted into mind. Different flow. Really unique. I found this piece to be really adorable to tell you the truth. Sweet. Well done. keep up the great work.~mel
I have often wanted to write a poem about rain but have never really known how to go about it. you captured it quite well. and i like how you begin with rain only coming at a drizzle and how the poem continues the rain gets heavier and then ending with the sun creeping out adds such a nice touch. I see many poems start happy and end depressing but i like how yours is the reverse. much better feeling at the end. well done xoxo