Comments : Rain

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Cool descriptions of the natural raining process. well penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    Nicely done =)! It's raining right now over here.. xD lol.. just a little random fact ^^ well, keep up your good writing!
    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittini

    That was amazing and now everytime it rains i going to think of this poem its just that good i really love it! flow and everything just worked for me so you got a 5/5!!

  • 10 years ago

    by ShadyPyro

    Wow...Such Imagery....Straight Up Awesome Poem =D...5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    I like this one a lot. It's the first one I read, so I've not much to compare it to. The flow was strange to me, but it seemed to be done on purpose. Which is good. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written poem. You created truly wonderful imagery through it.
    "The world becomes dark
    The sky begins to spark
    The clouds start to fight
    Sending us sparkling light"
    ^ I really like this stanza.

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Great imagery so very vivid your words were descriptive and powerful giving an overall stunning picture painted into mind. Different flow. Really unique. I found this piece to be really adorable to tell you the truth. Sweet. Well done. keep up the great work.~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassandra

    WOW! Great descriptions and flow. You have a talent of analyzing things sometimes people overlook and its definetly refreshing! Great Job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I have often wanted to write a poem about rain but have never really known how to go about it. you captured it quite well. and i like how you begin with rain only coming at a drizzle and how the poem continues the rain gets heavier and then ending with the sun creeping out adds such a nice touch. I see many poems start happy and end depressing but i like how yours is the reverse. much better feeling at the end. well done xoxo

  • 10 years ago

    by sarenightmarexx

    This great u can really express what happens when it rains 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Very descriptive and excellent imagery! I could picture the scenery in my mind. the words were so beautifully thought out, it was an outstanding piece!

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    A lot of the rhymes here were simple but, the words surrounding them were nicely penned. 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Very wellwritten you sure do have a way with words:D
    keep up the gr8 work
    hope to read mroe like it soon!
    tk care
    bree

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a beautiful and an amazing poem...

    Luzan and Nazeer

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I liked how it started off very suttle and then turned into a storm kind of thing. I think I'm going to try something like this. I'll give it a four.

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Here begins a drizzle
    [[Here {it} begins. I think would sound better.]]

    Now this is a poem. It had description and I could feel your appreciation for the rain. Speak like this throughout all your poems.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Very discriptive with a great flow and rhyming.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    Your work is great.
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Wow...
    Another Great Poem By You!! lol =]]
    That was soo Imagery...
    Very Beautiful.. =]]

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Rhyming is great. Imagery is excellent. You described rain beautifully. First stanza is my favorite one. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    Cute, it wasn't as descriptive as I know you can make it, but it was cute. Good job.