Wooooow! ok i find this poem totally awesome because i can relate so much its like its a chapter out of my mind! =] but ofcourse you wrote it, which makes it evn more wow! lol i know the feelings, ive been there done that..lol the saying.. =] great work!!! definately 5/5
nuf luv xx
Okay first off I will be honest. one part is different but heres how you could fix it remember its just a suggestion,
You've painted a place in my heart
And I will never let it *grow apart.
Maybe it works maybe it doesn't just go over it. Othere than that GREAT~100%homemade.lol