Falling Forever

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jun 4, 2007


The sky a solid colour,
Of greyish blue clouds.
Rain comes pouring down,
Like it's got something against me.

Sitting at the window...
Screen pulled wide open.
My hair and hands soaked,
From the torrential downpour.

Thunder crashing in the distance...
Yet no lightning to be seen.
I could perfectly content,
With sticking a straw out the window...

And drinking,
And drinking,
And drinking,

The crisp, cool water,
As it flows over my parched tongue.
Quenching my thirst,
As I hunger for more.

I could be perfectly content with...

Dancing in the rain,
Singing in the rain,
Eating in the rain,
Sleeping in the rain,
Bathing in the rain,
Living in the rain.

Tree's leaves come flying,
From every direction;
An effect of the wind,
That blows ever so quickly

I could be perfectly content with...

Wind whistling endlessly.
Thunder crashing endlessly.
Lightning striking endlessly.
And rain falling... forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I really liked the way this was written. And the concept was unique... it had my interest through the whole read! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hmm, different! but i liked it a lot =] especially this part

    Dancing in the rain
    Singing in the rain
    Eating in the rain
    Sleeping in the rain
    Bathing in the rain
    Living in the rain

    it was really refreshing, i felt like i was actually doing those things
    and it made me thirsty!! hehe

    i gave it a 5

    geo

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I love this poem.
    Although, it would seem better with
    Punctuation.
    Other than that...
    I think your rhyming was smooth.
    Your flow was great.

    PS: Love your format :P
    Your spelling was, too.
    Wonderful right, dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. this poem isnt the best ive read of yours. idk how much the repetition really fits in this poem. however, the imagery was awesome. check your flow again. the words didnt blend as it couldve.

    =]

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