What you deserve.......

by Mihaela   Jun 5, 2007


You'll love me less
I must to confess
I'm scared of loneliness
The same faithless..
Your soul is my enemy
Also gives me energy
And power to keep on
What you destroyed before
I don't wanna hear any excuse
Now I'm so confused
It's your turn to receive a refuse.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Farukh

    This is something naughty I have ever read....you are actually trying to portray the childish feelings of the woman for her man 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Sad, but good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Really good poem.I believe you could have made it longer and even better but still it was short but very good.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it is very short but still powerfully written. I don't like rhyming. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    I really liked this whole poem, from the rhyming to the title... great jobb, and great flow... 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the commentt

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