The real You =((

by Mihaela   Jul 23, 2007


Chilling around..searching for you
Unfortunately you're gone
And I don't know where to find you
Don't make me feeling guilty
You know I have no fault
You're the one who did mistakes
While hanging around with those fake friends
In front of them you pretend you don't know me
And that's not all right
I fight for us and you're able
To make some things like that?
Hmmm....It's strange for me to find out what
Are the feelings of that boy
For a girl with broken heart....

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  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Touching loverly poem!
    Keep up the good work

    Danielle
    xx

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    Fantastic job, and there's no need to tell you how emotional it was to read because you know how emotional it was to write. All of your work is powerful, best of luck to yah, you deserve it. 5/5 sweetie

  • 16 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Thanks for the comment i really like this keep it up love always linda

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    I think this poem was very unique and had a lot in it. All I can critique is to maybe watch your grammar. But the poem was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up.
    <3Raych

    and thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Find out who your fri3nds ar3

    That is a very good poem:) Thankx 4 the comment you sent me!! I really do love this poem tho!!! Good job!! Good luck on your other ones 4 the future!

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