Hmm, i liked this message, beacuse of its strong message =] i enjoyed the flow rhyme and structure too, its was precise and the poem was an overall very influential piece of work!
keep it up! nuff luv xx
This piece you have written is full of wisdom about life. We all have our own personal war that we deal with each and everyday. It is how we deal with it that makes us who we are and who we will become in life. May your heart always be filed with peace and joy each and everyday.
You are wise beyond your years...and you seem sad beyond the tears... good job i enjoyed this poem...good work 5/5 vote and comment on my latest "MY DOUBTS" "GIFTS OF SORROW" ""MY TEARS" "CROWN OF THORNS"