Comments : Our Own Personal War

  • 11 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Very encouraging, life can be tough at times but we have to keep on fighting the war

  • 11 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hmm, i liked this message, beacuse of its strong message =] i enjoyed the flow rhyme and structure too, its was precise and the poem was an overall very influential piece of work!
    keep it up! nuff luv xx

  • 11 years ago

    by That One Girl

    I love this poem!!!!! it is the truth. we all have wars. keep up the good work!5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ogbuagu

    Very good like i said earlier you are the best

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob

    Nicely done. I know exactly what you're talking about. I like this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darlena


  • 11 years ago

    by jason

    Ok yeah sorry something is sjut seriously wrong with me today lol i am kinda in an irritable mood so i will read these later... maybe its the ehat anyways good poem another 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Really good poem, well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by nichole

    Very good....i like it and it describes alot.....very well written

  • 11 years ago

    by ~DaYiS~

    I agree with u...i love the way u wrote it. it really gies straight to ur point. GREAT!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rhi

    Well done. a great poem. I Loved it. we all need hope, and your poem give that. :)

  • Excellent! it might not rhyme, but it is as powerful, to the point and as true as the greatest poems I've read...great talent I must say...keep up the good work...

    PS I notice people and if the occasion calls for it I will help them...not all people are selfless drones...PEACE>

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "This world we live in is an up hill struggle,
    Everyday we live with our guilt,
    Our heads full of anxiety,
    All the time we have our own personal wars,"

    This is my favorite of yours that I have read. It sends such a true message to the reader.... :] Ah! I just love it. Fantastic job. 5.5

    - Steph <3

  • 11 years ago

    by betty

    Wow i like actually like it... its true!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Derf K

    Inspiring. The lines flowed into each other.

  • 11 years ago

    by Joseph

    YOur writting is a lot like mine- I mean that as a compliment. consentrate on love poems and emotional might find some of your best work in them

  • 11 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This piece you have written is full of wisdom about life. We all have our own personal war that we deal with each and everyday. It is how we deal with it that makes us who we are and who we will become in life. May your heart always be filed with peace and joy each and everyday.


  • 11 years ago

    by NIDAL

    You are wise beyond your years...and you seem sad beyond the tears... good job i enjoyed this poem...good work 5/5 vote and comment on my latest "MY DOUBTS" "GIFTS OF SORROW" ""MY TEARS" "CROWN OF THORNS"

  • 11 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    The message is so true.
    A great piece of writing, meningful.
    Well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Lilith

    I can relate a lot to this poem. Keep up the fantastic job!