Aww this poemis so sad =[ i nearly cried, maybe coz i can relate. im so sorry. as long as you got your feelings and emotions through and across, your poems will always be ace!
nuff luv, dont stop writing xx
I think that this one is the best! but shouldn't it be bruises instead of bruses? anyway I think you did a wonderful job on portraying you feeling but i dont really understand the end why fall on your knees? but that just me, 5/5 kisses stephanie