Alvina Marsha (acrostic)

by unknown   Jun 21, 2007

Aura of pulchritude,
Light of beauty,
Visible to my eyes.
Incalculable loves,
Numerous affections,
Always fulfill your life.

Malice disappear,
Aversion vanish,
Refract all bad ways.
Swan or goose,
Hare or rabbit,
Admire your enchantment.


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  • 10 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Very cute! It's sweet to write a poem about someone you care about even if they don't know it. You used just the right words to get the full effect. 5/5 <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Lovely piece, i loved it.

    How you expressed your emotions was beautiful.

    Your word choise was really good.

    I liked it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Again your vocabulary is just stunning and beautiful. Poem after poem I try to use new vocab. but for you it just seems to come so natually. I love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    This had amazing vocab! And the flow was just flawless through out the whole thing, It was truly one of my favorites pieces I've read. This girl is really lucky. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem seemed a little strange. The flow was fine, but the choosing of words was rather confusing. 4/5