Comments : Have you ever

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww.. It was really good. Simple but beautiful just like love. You're reall in love man. I adore the emotions in it, keep it up. Flow was smooth.

    thinking of how lucky
    you are
    to have this angel
    ^We have the same style in writing xD

    Just a suggestion to use punctuations :) because a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune.

    anyway overall 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Its not corney i like a lot it seems like alot depth was put in it or feeling great job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    That was so cute! I loved it! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by katy

    I love this poem can really relate to all of it, i feel it all the time with my bf, SSOOO GOOD! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    I really liked this poem,
    it really explained what loving someone is like.
    You showed your talent and you're flow was spotless.
    Amazing, great job.
    And I agree with Marc,
    punctuations would really add the cherry to the icream.;)

  • 10 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww..this poem is so sweet and it makes me wnt a bf even more lol the poem was good but mayb help wit the flow though but it wuz good and it made me smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Awww how sweet
    well done
    5/5
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by Danny Bloom

    I love my girl like that every second of the day lol its not corny if you mean it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    A nice free free verse poem. a bit lengthy but nice.

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    That is so beautiful ,and yes I do love someone that much but unfortunantly i know I will never be with that someone.Very well done on such an excellent write.

  • 10 years ago

    by ABake

    Awww, and yes I am loving like this right now.
    This poem was a beautiful dedication.
    I loved the way you had it setup, and I was quite captivated by your words. So much emotion, and although there wasn't a consistant flow the peice was just beautiful :)
    Great job!
    5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow you are superb I would say, you must continue writing love poems. The whole poem is cohesive and the words nicely strung each other. All positive points :)

    5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Awww..
    How Sweet..
    Great Job =]]

  • 10 years ago

    by Alesia

    What a beautiful dedication. There's nothing wrong with a little corny. I thought it was very sweet. The look of this poem was interesting, I found I had to read it really fast because I didn't know where to stop and when start, but it's not such a bad thing. It's almost like when thoughts race around your head and your pen wont move fast enough, not to mention that it's like a racing heart. So, it was a very cool poem.

    Alesia <3

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw that was adorable...i didn't think it was corney at all : ) i loved it 5/5 <33