Wow the beging made me so happy then i went sad very nice poem very original, nice transition, description and depth truly loved it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Great Job....5/5...check out my poems...

Aww.. that's sad..

Went from Happy to sad.. I liked how you did that.

I thought this poem was very well written, I really liked it.. I loved the part where they are sitting together and looking up at the stars.. 5/5

Some stars shine even here on earth, just no one ever sees them. Really well done poem, you should be proud of yourself if you cna allow that.

Aww i luved this poem!!! it flowed really nicely nd it was so sweet but sad!!
5/5
luv fallen xoxo

Wow i really liked this poem it started off all happy then changed with a good flow 5/5
keep up the good work!

Thats amazing!!!!!!!!!! I loved that poem. Okay, it must go on my favorites!!!

A truly amazing write you can tell its from within had me mezmerised keep up the great work

O.m.g i loved this poem so cute and sweet and wow... its going on my fave's list =)

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Excellent. well crafted, one of the best.