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by BrokenREALiTy Jul 3, 2007
Love, romance /
You know the typical teenage girl,
With the shattered cries and defeated pride?
Remember the broken hearts; the many secrets,
And the agonizing pain they try to hide?
It's funny how they're looked down upon;
How much they get yelled at for not letting go.
And what's even more amusing is that I do that now,
When I used to be one of those.
Those little girls with the made-up smiles,
Looking forward to nothing but a fairy tale demise.
Walking around hopeful, with such naivety,
Just to end up with a loved one to despise.
Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.
And though I still sit among lost memories,
I've open myself and done what those girls can't.
To slowly reveal the heart inside of me,
And accept the love of another man.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang
Does it make sense? I don't know what I was trying to write... It just popped into mind, so I typed it here.
Hey i just found this in my favs I don't remember reading it but i just wna say its amazing and it makes perfect sense :) tc
Koo i liked it
by Finding myself
This was good
i could fully understand it
by Anonymous Angel
I liked your poem, the flow was great, just as great as your vocab:)
Its a poem some people can relate too, like me.. keep up the good work!
Wow hun! this is brilliant! :]
i loved every stanza! great write!
i love your work!
sorry i've been really busy and haven't gotten on here much. miss ya too hun!<3