Open Thought

by Dark Demise   Jul 9, 2007


The world will surround your innocence
Rip you open and sow you back up with ignorance
Drag you down and throw you along with everyone else
And just wait for you to give in and sell your self

We are all like this in every way,
Just everyone has there own way of looking at it and everyone has there own say,
We all go threw the same process we all live the same life style
Nothing is the same anymore, things tend to only last a short while,
There's only so many options out there that we can choose from
Lets just pray we all try to stay truthful and choose the right one,

though we may stray off course from time to time,
We need something to do besides sit on the couch and wait for a sign
Faith will test us in every which way it can
And we may fill are selfs up with doubt so much that we cant stand

But it's up to us to decide what to do
and decide what's worth sticking out for someone, and what's worth going through,
are you going to make a difference? are you going to be one of the few?

Over all everyone is the same, and we all live the same life process,
It's just up to us, If we want to keep moving forward and continue to progress,
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This poem is basically just thinking out loud, and just making my thoughts into a poem,
Let me know what you think,
If you rate and comment please be honest

Hope you enjoy, I should have more on the way soon, Getting back into my writing phase again =)

Eric,

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  • Wow, this poem absolutely left me speechless. It had so many touching words. The image from this was very powerful and the flow was just perfect. Really good job with this one.

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Just amazing, how u equal everybody in this poem. You must be very intellegent. Thinking out loud, really loved it all, thinking about life itself and how it really is. A great idea. Nice chose of words. Really meaningful.
    I loved this thought : things tend to only last a short while, it's so true, life always changeing so fast and so on.
    Really enjoyed this piece!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem. The flow was great and the wording perfect. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome write, very meaningful. The flow was good, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I think this is a wonderful write, full of expression, emotion, and truth. There were a few spelling errors and grammatical things, such as "there"
    needing to be "their", "are" needing to be "our" etc. But over all a pretty fluid, thoughtful outpour.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    *N

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