Comments : A Happy Birthday

  • 11 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    5/5 because it was really sweet. ^_^ ty!
    and right back at you. :3

  • 11 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I love every word , great work.

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    This was excellent, the ending stanza was so funny and full of happiness. your skill has greatly inproved to an uncanny level, well done.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Jemma

    Wow, nice and cheery and wow... a birthday poem! Love it...


  • 11 years ago

    by unknown

    Nice rythm.. Nice flow.. Nicely done.
    It's a very nice poem.. Best birthday poem i've read this far. :)
    good job.. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    This gave me a smile. =]

    It's so endearing and cute.

  • 11 years ago

    by Veamm

    Nice and cute..

  • 11 years ago

    by Twobit

    A birthday one! Marvelous and I appreciate the comment! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ADifferentSoul

    Sweet poem

  • 11 years ago

    by nikki

    I wish i felt like that on my birthday. i loved it, the way you expressed it was great. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    i loved it!
    i felt as if it were my birthday!
    [only 2 months away] lol
    very creative =]]

  • 10 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Cute poem ^^
    The rhyming was great. very nice. =]

  • 10 years ago

    by gack60

    Again another good piece, nice and smooth all the way through.

    Great message too! i can see this on a hallmark someday!!



  • 10 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, i can really relate to the feelin you speak of in this verse:

    We get a solid start
    of new hope in our heart.

    mainly b/c my birthday is coming up.
    good write. and thanx for the comment

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    Awww, so sweet poem!! I loved it, birthday poems are most that I read, very cute.


    Best wishes,