Okay. what could i possibly say that would sum up how i feel about this poem? nothing. this is frikken amazing...i don't even know what to say. the power emotion and depth in this piece was beautiful. this poem produced some very provoking thoughts for me. i just loved this. i can't even get over it..wow.
I have to agree with Makaveil. This poem is just one of the most best poems in the world!;in my opinion. Amazing write I would have to say my favorite stanza's where these two below.
Religion doesn't start a war,
Opinion stokes that fire.
Intolerance for one's beliefs,
Makes the flames grow higher.
It doesn't matter what you think,
You have the right to choose.
But if you take my right from me,
Then everyone will lose.
They just seemed to pop out of the screen to me. I really liked the rhythming and the way you used your words. You used vast majority of writing...Like complete etc....Amazing work!! Keep it up. Loads Of Love From Roxy.