Damn... This is so sad =( I'm sorry for your loss. Well.. This poem has a really nice flow in it. And it's almost like you can really feel the pain of those mother's in this poem. Really nicely done. This really deserves a 5/5 =]
Wow that's really sad. It gave me goosebumps.
It's an amazing poem, dear. The flow is off here and there, but that's not really a big deal because it doesn't mess with the poem. If that makes sense.
The meaning to this poem is amazing, along with the poem itself.
I think i found it :P
omg wow.. you had me in tears, the peoms is sooo emotioally thought out.. i dont even know how to decsribe it really.. its so well done, and so well put .. a very good dedication poem
added to my favorites :)
Wow that was really good. And also true it probably happens every day even though we never hear about it. sometimes its just sad knowing that there are most likely tons of people that this is happend too, no matter who you are.
To me the flow was a little off throughout this piece, but the emotion and meaning portrayed definitly makes up for it none the less. This poem was touching definitly a good read and I loved it from start to finish. I guess I'll go with a 5/5~mel