You alone

by blueknight   Aug 2, 2007


Finding the living piece of my heart
In the reality of truth that hurts
To this world that full of lies
I saw tears running from your eyes

Like crystals falling from heaven
So I catch them with my shoulder
And cover you with my arms
And to you I owe a heartfelt psalm

Now I found my heart in your hands
You're the only reason why I stand
In this fight for life to live and survive
In the battle of my interminable love

In this world where all is forbidden
How can I make things to happen?
When there are walls between us?
And all they want is to separate us.

Ill fight for the love I found in you,
Ill fight for the life to be with you,
For my heart felt that you love me too,
Coz I can't live my life, without you.

And your name was already written
Inside my heart that have lots of scars
It cannot be healed by moment in time
Coz you alone can make me feel fine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    Lol nice, I like the last stanza.
    It's got a jumbled structure, it sort of adds to the poem. It's very cool.
    Could've hit the rhymes harder, but I like the words choosen.
    Very good.

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Yep yep, this was awsome gene, been waiting for a new one and it tis great, love the flow so its a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming man!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Hey love the content of this one and how your imagination works, on how you describe your feelings is great too..as in wow!!I can say that every words really comes from the heart.keep it up tsong! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    The middle and end captured me 5/5 very nice poem

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