As soon as I started reading this I was intrigued. In my mind I was silently thinking, "Let this have a happy ending." -- And it did! I like how you started off so sombre, full of despair, yet the closing message was that of hope, and of not giving up.
I can relate to this one.
Excellently written, very powerful and emotional. I like the form of this poem very much, and the words you used to describe emotions.
The first and the third stanzas are my favorite ones.
Great job, you're very talented. 5/5
an awesome poem, I think that it is a very powerfull and emotional poem. I like that it is sad and it also has an happy ending...once I started to read I couln't stop, the flow is great.
my favorite lines are:
As he screams, blow after blow.
Destroying her mind, body and soul.