Wow i liked this one alot it was surley a great lession.. and your friend is right we do need more people like him,this boy is just a child and children tend to be more forgiving then teenagers or adults. They all want to love and be loved by some one. If they are not loved they will do anything to get loved.When their parents are mad and depressed they/we tend to think its our fault for this..when our mother,fathers,sisters,brothers or any one gets mad or leaves we think its our fault. The boy was/is strong and if this was a real story he will grow up a sweet boy to a man and will forever be strong no matter what god throws his way! but great job!
Wow this poem was amazing and you did a great job writing it.. not only did it flow really well but it told a great story.. it was sad but it had a very important lesson and you are right...we do need more people like that little boy in the world.. but we also need more people to end that type of violence and more people than will stand up for themselves..
anyway amazing job. I really enjoyed reading it and once i started, i couldnt stop because I was interested to find out what was going on. Great job. Keep it up! =)