Really good. really sad though.

amandaxx.

Another fantastic poem and I wouldn't change this one at all ~_~ The only problem is that some of the i's are capitalized and some aren't so I'd just go through and capitalize them all other then that it's a fantastic piece ^_^ It is amazing how much someone who says they love you can hurt you =( They never say that in all those love stories do they? =P Another 5
Rhea

Im a reallll emotional person and as i read that i imagined it all and i got emotional :P its a real good poem its scary that the one you love can hurt you so bad keep it up x

Wow
i can really relate to this.
amazingly written =]

The story is good, but like someone told me, some of the riming is a little forced, just go to google, search "ryhiming dicitonary" and go to first one, its sooo helpful!

Wow i love your poem and i hope you're alright but men can be jerks i know how you feel keep up the good work and keep your head up
5/5