Comments : Fly By Night

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I have no knowledge of this style, but what you have wrote is a great poem with great feelings.
    as always you have done another great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    WOW! This is outstanding. I absolutly love it. The wording, the imagery, everything about it just screams out and totally draws me into it.

    I cannot find enough words to say how wonderful and great this poem is.

    I want to say more, but I am just speechless and taken back with a new breath...

    Thanks so much for sharing this with everyone.

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Wow I would so say that this is a contest poem. I love it, it's just an amazing poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by lish

    This is definately contest worthy infact i think it is first place worthy well done
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was beautiful.
    The imagery was amazing, the vocab. was great, overall it was just flawless.

    && It was definately contest worthy. :]] No doubt in my mind.

    "Let's fly by night, and hide by day,
    Let's leave this sight, and runaway,
    There's no use in reminiscing,
    Let go of the land you're bracing..."

    ^ Love that stanza. :]] Beautifully done. 5.5

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Well first I had to look up this style because I don't tend to write my poems with a specific form. Well overall I like the poem the flow was great and I had to think about it and reread it twice..which takes talent. I like the word usage you used. Now about the form. From what I researched this is too long for a Rondeau. A Rondeau has to be 10, 13, 15 lines. But I am not down voting you for that I thought I would just bring it to your attention. But good job! Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Oh wow very magical. I really loved this piece. Excellent word choice and very well thought out. Amazing piece!

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is a beautiful poem, the language was gorgeous, the flow and depth of the poem was amazing and the feeling and the picture coming from it was absolutely breathtaking. it's true.
    i'm adding this poem to my favorites
    i loved it.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Wonderfully written. Loved the style. Excellent use of imagery and very nice vocab.
    5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Though this is some what short, it is very well written.

    I love the concept that you have used here as well as the visual discriptions that you provide. It all allows the reader to imagine the scene as though they were there and flying by night themselves.

    Another piece that you have written to capture my attention and hold me throughout the entire poem.

    Nice... very nice

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Woderful vocab!! truly, you wield words well ;) beautiful imagery and great style. nice work.

  • 10 years ago

    by amoxi

    Very descriptive and wonderfully written even though it was short it was great good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Anna

    The imagery was beautiful, thot it was absolultely lovely

  • 10 years ago

    by Nuh

    Wow,,
    lol dont know what to say about this one..
    its just written from the heart i like that..

    give it a 5

  • 10 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    I fell in love with this poem after the 2nd stanza, it really cought me with your flowing lines and beautifully rhymed and well thought out words. It is truly lovely, and is definitely an exquisite poem that, i think, would make a grand song.

    Fly by night is no doubt an exellent write.

    Farewell.

    ~Richieeeee

  • 10 years ago

    by Melinda

    You know in a past life i wish i was a bird. and this poem makes me want to fly away. good job. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    Lovely! I think this is a well thought out piece. The first stanza is my favorite, and held perfect flow. A unique approach and wonderful outcome. Good use of vocabulary, imagery, and description.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N