Well first I had to look up this style because I don't tend to write my poems with a specific form. Well overall I like the poem the flow was great and I had to think about it and reread it twice..which takes talent. I like the word usage you used. Now about the form. From what I researched this is too long for a Rondeau. A Rondeau has to be 10, 13, 15 lines. But I am not down voting you for that I thought I would just bring it to your attention. But good job! Keep it up.
This is a beautiful poem, the language was gorgeous, the flow and depth of the poem was amazing and the feeling and the picture coming from it was absolutely breathtaking. it's true.
i'm adding this poem to my favorites
i loved it.
I fell in love with this poem after the 2nd stanza, it really cought me with your flowing lines and beautifully rhymed and well thought out words. It is truly lovely, and is definitely an exquisite poem that, i think, would make a grand song.