Comments : Mindfully Lost In Serenity

  • Wow!! wonderful poem. love the way you twisted it. first nice and then sad and sort of scary, but then nice again. good job and thanks for commenting on my poem..

  • 10 years ago

    by elmahdy

    Wooooooooow, no comment u r so talented in describing :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    What else would any poet say but....WOW!!!

    This is the epiphany of poetry in its most singular form.

    Quote - **Worried and confused,
    Or maybe melodramatic?
    Wondering why all is so poignant
    Why nothing is as joyous

    But wait,
    Who is that
    Behind the tree that drapes
    The picturesque view?**

    I adored this part, "Is this sorrow that i see, or quite simply an ocean view" - This is what i felt from that section of your poem.

    Well Done Shauna....Cant wait to read more of your work. 5/5/5/5/5!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow!!! this poem is soooo beautiful and just sooo great!! you describe everything so vividly and i can picture myself there as you see it and write it. very well written one of the best poems ive ever read so far. good job!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Beautiful job,
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hrodwyn

    I like this poem! It flows well!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ken

    I really like this poem great good

  • 10 years ago

    by Nula

    Wow this poem is so beautiful...check mine leave a comment i will appreciate it

  • 10 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Wow. This is brilliant.
    I must admit.. By looking at your comments, I didnt figure to see this. It completely blew me away.
    I love the concept, the plot, the form, the flow, the moral, the anology.
    Well damn, I loved the entire thing.

    I would love to see more from you.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Excellent free verse combining imagery with emotion

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WOW!!! What a beautiful write. One reading this could almost feel as though they were there...seeing exactly what you see. This piece is BEAUTIFUL! It's hard to actually place a reader in your sit but you did and it seemed so effortlessly. I admire you for that! WOW>>>I'm thoroughly impressed!!! NICE write my friend!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Wow. I love the descriptions and the imagery of this. Beautifully written. The flow was excellent, and great use of vocabulary. Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Leon

    Very calming, nice work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oh that was really cute. :) My favorite part was the rainbow line. That was a really cool way of saying it. I'll give it a five. Very good imagery. Five.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Excellent poem, it is really deep and you expressed emotions beautifully. I really like the way you wrote it, it has some special and great rhythm, imagery is also good. Fantastic piece, well done! It deserves 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by phi prosper

    Muy bien!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellent write. I loved the imagery and your choice of words. The structure was kept well throughout the poem. Outstanding piece of poetry from a great writter. Keep up the great work, I hope to be reading more soon.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Very expressive one..well concept and good ideas!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    A Beautiful penned, timeless treasure. Taking my senses on a vivid journey of thought. Excellent work and a joy to read!
    Peace and Blessings

  • 10 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Never in a million years could I write a poem like that. It had everything someone looks for when they read a poem: Imagery, flow, advanced vocab. You can put the reader into your shoes and make them feel what you are experiencing. Beautiful job. I would nominate this if my votes would work. Hands down amazing!
    :]
    5.5

    Ciao<3