Wow!!! this poem is soooo beautiful and just sooo great!! you describe everything so vividly and i can picture myself there as you see it and write it. very well written one of the best poems ive ever read so far. good job!!!
Wow. This is brilliant.
I must admit.. By looking at your comments, I didnt figure to see this. It completely blew me away.
I love the concept, the plot, the form, the flow, the moral, the anology.
Well damn, I loved the entire thing.
WOW!!! What a beautiful write. One reading this could almost feel as though they were there...seeing exactly what you see. This piece is BEAUTIFUL! It's hard to actually place a reader in your sit but you did and it seemed so effortlessly. I admire you for that! WOW>>>I'm thoroughly impressed!!! NICE write my friend!!!!!
Excellent poem, it is really deep and you expressed emotions beautifully. I really like the way you wrote it, it has some special and great rhythm, imagery is also good. Fantastic piece, well done! It deserves 5/5
Wow, excellent write. I loved the imagery and your choice of words. The structure was kept well throughout the poem. Outstanding piece of poetry from a great writter. Keep up the great work, I hope to be reading more soon.
Never in a million years could I write a poem like that. It had everything someone looks for when they read a poem: Imagery, flow, advanced vocab. You can put the reader into your shoes and make them feel what you are experiencing. Beautiful job. I would nominate this if my votes would work. Hands down amazing!