Tears of pink

by Keath   Sep 29, 2007


In the deep depths of the sea
Green clouds forming a brace
Smiles a girl with carved eyes
Blood plastered on her face

Given notice of a spell
Though the fingers won't entwine
Black riddles stay unspoken
Your words hurt more than mine

Crystals fallen out of the sky
Tracing paths on our ground
A bird dropped the letter long ago
Back to the origins of sound

Kiss the butt of my religion
Crush the mirrors of your fate
Red and pink are not forgiving
Killing now is not too late

Little girls smile in last despair
Yet the candle is blown out
Iron darts have found some patches
Attacking harder than your shout

When love is making false appearances
And lies seem to be true
Then kiss my red contains for ever
Only the blackness belongs to you

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  • 11 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is very great poem, I really amazed with your flow and word picking. It's so sentimental. Also the story is great too, 5/5 without a doubt!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I love this piece! It contains so vivid imagery weaved with superb choice of words and excellent descriptions. Great poem from the beginning to the end, with powerful and captivating atmosphere and fantastically expressed emotions.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Given notice of a spell
    Though the fingers won't entwine
    Black riddles stay unspoken
    Your words hurt more than mine-

    Keep up, you have great talent!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "In the deep depths of the sea
    Green clouds forming a brace
    Smiles a girl with carved eyes
    Blood plastered on her face"

    These lines were dark and deep, but the entire poem was fabulous. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very different. but enjoyable to read.

    In the deep depths of the sea
    Green clouds forming a brace
    Smiles a girl with carved eyes
    Blood plastered on her face..

    i loved this part it kinda made me feel all chilly and for just words to do that it has to be really strong..keep it up u are very good. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very strongly written. i loved it alot. it kept my attention through the whole thing. my fave lines were

    When love is making false appearances
    And lies seem to be true
    Then kiss my red contains for ever
    Only the blackness belongs to you

    keep it up. i loved it