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by Illusion Oct 2, 2007
Friendship, family /
I don't know the reason why
i feel this way for you
but there is no excuse
million seasons are the truth
And in every single season
i found the word 'love' for you
but i know you will turn me down
the snow perishes without sound
Spring will come soon
but you won't bother to look around
rain will wash the street
muddy banks still breed.
I liked it but it was hard to tell wat u wanted things to ryhme with wat... u gta keep things goin in one steady motion... b ut other then that it was good.
Wow...great poem :) go on
I like that.
I just think that some of the stanzas could be put together, instead of the two lined ones. but overall good job
Very good the only thing I'd really harp on is to get your stanzas equalled out but it was still a very good poem nice work
Loved the emotion you put into it! :-)