Reason

by Illusion   Oct 2, 2007


I don't know the reason why
i feel this way for you
but there is no excuse
million seasons are the truth

And in every single season
i found the word 'love' for you

but i know you will turn me down
the snow perishes without sound

Spring will come soon
but you won't bother to look around

rain will wash the street
muddy banks still breed.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Marisel

    I liked it but it was hard to tell wat u wanted things to ryhme with wat... u gta keep things goin in one steady motion... b ut other then that it was good.

  • 16 years ago

    by oOoPrInCeSsoOo

    Wow...great poem :) go on

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I like that.
    I just think that some of the stanzas could be put together, instead of the two lined ones. but overall good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good the only thing I'd really harp on is to get your stanzas equalled out but it was still a very good poem nice work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Brill

    Loved the emotion you put into it! :-)

    Danielle
    x

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