This is a excellent dedication to someone who really means a lot to you. It's perfect, and had a pretty good flow to it. :] You did a excellent job explaining several things about this person that makes them mean something to you. Great work. 5/5.
Love this one.
Seems the person you discrbe is very special to you, so you made yourself very clear, that's good.
Very sweet you wrote it for her. A lucky person.
Nice words and good flow.
Enjoyed reading it.